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  • A Dark Angel of Ice

    From Richard Falken@1:123/115 to All on Thu Feb 9 11:25:16 2023
    Hello, worshippers of the Peacebringer! I return with yet another treat.

    A Dark Angel of Ice is my new not-so-short story. It tells the tale of a kid trapped in an unsustainable situation, who finds a last hope to escape in the figure of a Starforce recruiter. Maybe, just maybe, pledging loyalty to the Death God and joining his army of the dead couls solve his problems... what could go wrong?

    This time, instead of writing the story directly in English, I wrote it in Spanish and then translated it over. The result looks quite good so far. I consider the current iteration of the manuscript still "beta", but hardcore followers of the Peacebringer are invited to take a peek.

    If you want to get lost in a world of honor, spaceships, orphanages that sell kids as slaves and military forces that are as cruel as they are protective of their own, drop me a private message.


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  • From John Dovey Firecat@2:460/256 to Richard Falken on Thu Feb 9 20:34:00 2023
    Hello, worshippers of the Peacebringer! I return with yet another treat.
    A Dark Angel of Ice is my new not-so-short story. It tells the tale of a
    kid
    trapped in an unsustainable situation, who finds a last hope to escape in
    the
    figure of a Starforce recruiter. Maybe, just maybe, pledging loyalty to
    the
    Death God and joining his army of the dead couls solve his problems...
    what
    could go wrong?
    This time, instead of writing the story directly in English, I wrote it
    in
    Spanish and then translated it over. The result looks quite good so far. consider the current iteration of the manuscript still "beta", but
    hardcore
    followers of the Peacebringer are invited to take a peek.
    If you want to get lost in a world of honor, spaceships, orphanages that
    sell
    kids as slaves and military forces that are as cruel as they are
    protective of
    their own, drop me a private message.
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    Sounds awesome 8-)

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  • From Richard Falken@1:123/115 to John Dovey Firecat on Thu Feb 9 15:18:22 2023
    Re: A Dark Angel of Ice
    By: John Dovey Firecat to Richard Falken on Thu Feb 09 2023 08:34 pm

    Sounds awesome 8-)

    It is freaking awesome.

    Somebody congratulated me yesterday because I have been keeping this series up for years already. I hadn't thought about that, but it is quite a feat. Now, if
    I managed to get more than 20 fans it would be even better.

    Do you want a piece of awesome?

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  • From John Dovey Firecat@2:460/256 to Richard Falken on Fri Feb 10 01:29:46 2023
    Re: A Dark Angel of Ice
    By: John Dovey Firecat to Richard Falken on Thu Feb 09 2023 08:34 pm
    Sounds awesome 8-)
    It is freaking awesome.
    Somebody congratulated me yesterday because I have been keeping this
    series up
    for years already. I hadn't thought about that, but it is quite a feat.
    Now, if
    I managed to get more than 20 fans it would be even better.
    Do you want a piece of awesome?
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    Definitely want a piece of awesome.
    Also, do you want me to do the ebook thing for you again?

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  • From Richard Falken@1:123/115 to John Dovey Firecat on Thu Feb 9 17:52:53 2023
    Re: A Dark Angel of Ice
    By: John Dovey Firecat to Richard Falken on Fri Feb 10 2023 01:29 am

    Definitely want a piece of awesome.
    Also, do you want me to do the ebook thing for you again?


    I will send you a link asap.

    The story is still a draft and I will probably send it to the Ban workshop anyway, so no formatting needed yet. Thanks for the offer.

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