Hello!

I am giving the finishing touches to my newest short story. I was going to incorporate
it as part of a subplot in a book, but I decided it worked better as a standalone
piece. It is part of the Worth of Immortality.

I must confess I ditched all the standard writing advice for this one and just wrote
it as I wanted to write it. As a result I consider it even less comercial than my
other works (which is saying something).

PROOFREADERS WANTED!

If you want to walk into a world of honor, in which an oath must be upheld beyond the
black gates of Death and in which the Commander of the worst technological terror
ever created by mortals is but a pawn in the hands of beings made from the stuff
nightmares are made of, drop me a private message. Just remember: once the pact of
blood and ice is sealed, it may never be undone.


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Hello!

I am giving the finishing touches to my newest short story. I was going

to incorporate

it as part of a subplot in a book, but I decided it worked better as a

standalone

piece. It is part of the Worth of Immortality.


I must confess I ditched all the standard writing advice for this one and

just wrote

it as I wanted to write it. As a result I consider it even less comercial

than my

other works (which is saying something).


PROOFREADERS WANTED!


If you want to walk into a world of honor, in which an oath must be

upheld beyond the

black gates of Death and in which the Commander of the worst

technological terror

ever created by mortals is but a pawn in the hands of beings made from

the stuff

nightmares are made of, drop me a private message. Just remember: once

the pact of

blood and ice is sealed, it may never be undone.

Me Me Me ... Pick me!!! <grin>


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Re: Pact of Blood and Ice
By: John Dovey to Richard Falken on Tue Nov 15 2022 08:07 pm

Me Me Me ... Pick me!!! <grin>

Lol, you ar not giving me much of an option, do you?

I just found some mistakes worth fixing in the current draft, so I will give you a
link to a corrected version of the draft latter today.

Cheers!

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Hi Richard...

Hello!
I am giving the finishing touches to my newest short story. I was going

to incorporate

it as part of a subplot in a book, but I decided it worked better as a

standalone

piece. It is part of the Worth of Immortality.
I must confess I ditched all the standard writing advice for this one and

just wrote

it as I wanted to write it. As a result I consider it even less comercial

than my

other works (which is saying something).
PROOFREADERS WANTED!
If you want to walk into a world of honor, in which an oath must be

upheld beyond the

black gates of Death and in which the Commander of the worst

technological terror

ever created by mortals is but a pawn in the hands of beings made from

the stuff

nightmares are made of, drop me a private message. Just remember: once

the pact of

blood and ice is sealed, it may never be undone.
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I sent you a netmail. Did you get it? There is always Protonmail too. ;)

Ciao!
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Re: Pact of Blood and Ice
By: August Abolins to Richard Falken on Wed Nov 16 2022 06:18 pm

I sent you a netmail. Did you get it? There is always Protonmail too. ;)

Don't worry, your link is on its way.

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Don't worry, your link is on its way.

Read and some grammatical corrections suggested. Sent to your Protonmail.

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Re: Pact of Blood and Ice
By: august abolins to Richard Falken on Thu Nov 17 2022 11:44 am

Don't worry, your link is on its way.

Read and some grammatical corrections suggested. Sent to your Protonmail.

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I got them and answered your mail too.

I will not discuss further because I prefer the others here to have no prejudices while reading their copies XD

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I got them and answered your mail too.

Got it. I was a bit tired when I started, and stopped at the 50% point. But then I wanted to see how the events concluded. However, it's a bit of a task to stop and make corrections/suggestions.

I will not discuss further because I prefer the others here to have no prejudices while reading their copies XD

Absolutely. I knew that. That is why I maintained our pvt channel.

I will try to answer your questions asap while they are still quite fresh in my mind.

How many more pairs of eyes do you have on your story?


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Re: Pact of Blood and Ice
By: august abolins to Richard Falken on Thu Nov 17 2022 12:25 pm

How many more pairs of eyes do you have on your story?

Four more pairs that I know of. Not bad, because it is usually very hard to get
people interested XD


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